Help Me

These thoughts seem wierd,
In the back of my head,
I'm hanging so high,
On such a breakable thread.

I'm hurting inside,
I'm not feeling well,
The anger within me,
Is burning like hell.

I'm crying again,
Why am I alone,
Turns run off me,
Like rain off a stone.

So please help me,
Write me a letter,
Send me some pictures,
They make me feel better.

Tell me you love me,
Tell me you care,
Put meaning into life,
Heal me if you dare.



Poetry by Justin
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Written on 2006-12-25 at 18:05

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Edgar John Jackson
It's so important to know there are people around who always love and help us so much go on thru thick and thin. I think we so much in common about the kind of emotions you put in words in your poems. Great work. EJJ :)
2007-08-08



WOW wonderful poem... I can feel your pain as I read your words. Your a great poet.
Keep em coming!
Sally
2007-06-18


betsy Firefly
If you send me your address, I will! You're a great guy for sharing your thoughts and you do write well.
2007-01-01


Morpheus
You have written words so universal to all of us. Love is such a simple feeling, until something goes wrong with it. The complexities of pain and loneliness are only experienced by ourselves, when we are alone and hurting.

I hope you are at peace this Christmas night. You have friends here who care.
2006-12-26


brian paglia
I feel your pain my friend.I see a lot of my style in your's and also share in the feelings you've shared.I don't pretend to have any magic answers to loneliness but hanging in there is always a popular one.Have the best holidays you can.
2006-12-25


Zoya Zaidi
If this will help, please let me tell you, dear Justin:
I care for a friend like you!
A will think of a friend like you!
I will pray tonight, the holy night,
For your hapiness and future bright,
I will wish upon the spirit of the star,
To bring cheer and calm to your heart!
Amen!
Merry Christmas!
(((Wram Christmas hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2006-12-25