A cowrite with Blue eyed Soul. It is a tribute to her skill as a poet that she was able to follow my stanzas so quickly for this Villanelle. She really is a skillful poet and a very close  friend


So Much Under My Skin A cowrite with Blueyed Soul

 

In my haunted dreams you always remained
A beautiful; enchanting; delightful  memory
So much under my skin, I worshiped your name 

Days I counted with  your voice resounding
And in my ears your sweet note softly lingered
In my haunted dreams you always remained

Yet  even though we parted so desperately
Your memory enriched my days for you were 
So much under my skin , I worshiped your name

Every living moment my mind would wander
Hapless In endless pursuit of my need for you
In my haunted dreams you always remained

For  then in the dawning of my  realised love
I came and offered my heart  completely  to you 
So much under my skin , I worshiped your name

And bathed in the fragrant essence of your being
You, like a sacred incense permeate my very soul
In my haunted dreams you always remained
So much under my skin, I worshiped your name





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-12-25 at 23:33

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A duet, as seamlessly well executed as always! The two of you match so perfectly both in style and in the depth of meaning of each word used
2006-12-26


Kathy Lockhart
What a smooth and lovely flowing poem. The union of both of your poetic talents create works of beauty.
2006-12-26


BlueyedSoul
This was such a delight to write, as the words just flowed so naturally. Villanelles are sweet to write and writing with you just added to the joy Michael. Thank you for the pleasure.
~Blue
2006-12-25