I'm Just Nothing More

I can't walk alone any longer
Guide me by embrace
To a place were i'm just a stranger

I can't fight with such power
Feed me courage
To make me stronger

I can't let anybody be erase
'Cuz im just nothing more
Were i'm something less

I can't make promises for tomorrow
But nobody's gonna love you more
Than the way that i would do

I want you, I need you
Let me love you
Believe me, just trust me
Then love me



Poetry by Mark Leo Dayao
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Written on 2007-02-04 at 11:47

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Parnika
Very powerful
"Feed me courage" has great imagery!

"I can't make promises for tomorrow
But nobody's gonna love you more
Than the way that i wanted to

I want you, I need you
Let me love you
Believe me, just trust me
Then love me "
We have a lot in common!
2007-02-05


Rob Graber
Stanza 4 strikes me as quite original, though perhaps not terribly romantic! (He doesn't say that he DOES love her more than anybody else will, only that he WANTED to?!)
2007-02-04