the below lines came 2 me - but i am unable to do anything else with it!!


lyric in progress.....



Its like all is consumed
and thrown away empty
eyes looking and ready
although the heart is a rock
that sits without motion, without a sound
just soaking up all the commotion



Poetry by gills
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Written on 2007-02-08 at 11:42

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V.V.Ramesh
Good one Gills:)

Rate:5
2007-02-16


Amanda K
rythemtically and musically written
2007-02-10


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
O!O!O!Shall i sing the lyrics for you?

na na na la la la nanananaaaaa
soaking up all the commotion
thrown away empty

la na la naaaa

eyes looking and ready
lanalalalaaaa

all is consumed
and thrown away empty

la la la na nanana

the heart is a rock
lalalalala la la na na nana

the heart is a rock
that sits without motion,

na na na
without a sound
all is consumed
and thrown away empty

la la la na la la nana

just soaking up all the commotion
the heart is a rock na na na

all is consumed
and thrown away empty
eyes looking and ready

la la la laaaaaa

It could be a very good song you know :) I hope you like my version of your lyrics :)
2007-02-08