when we go there




a sound in the distance
words my mission
comming from a heart beat
looking back across the street

an image in the background
love my wishing
comming from a feeling
looking up at the celing

a night in the comming
you my commission
comming from longing
looking at years passed by

a sound in the distance
an image in the background
a night in the comming

three is my lucky number
two is a blessing
one a time for creation

words our mission
love our wishing
a night in the comming

when we go there
comming from a feeling
comming from longing

when we go there






Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-02-15 at 07:25

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a sound in the distance
an image in the background
a night in the comming

Very eerie images in this poem sort of Walter De la Mare atmospherical images

a night in the coming
and soon the night
night must fall

the gloom of the Millais painting

Approaching Dusk

powerful and cleverly crafted not your normal genre i thought well done

rgds mike
2007-02-15