E.M. Zacklin
It's short yet very catching, you can fel the sadness and the loneliness that comes after, pretty work :)
2025-09-28

CC
fantastic choice of words. this poem leaves tastes sounds and colour. Very interesting. Very painful.
2009-10-27

NotaDeadPoet
oxymorons add to the imagery of blind lighthouse and clinging to that which is "untouchable" and sensory images a scream away from open wounds--ouch!
2007-02-21

F.i.in.e Moods
so much aching in these words, stings a heart... i can feel the disappointment and the yearning for the love to not have taken a turn towards the end... my interpretation... an emotive write... thanks for sharing :f xx
2007-02-21

lastromantichero
Katherine this is beautiful please cling to the beautiful moments of your love this poem is so evocative of a yearning rgds mike
2007-02-21