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Your Voice

Your voice is silent
in the woods where we last met.
I searched for you
behind the great rock,
in the valley,
among the orchard trees,
and I even peered
down the deep well!

I saw your reflection
in the well's cold water
and I smiled
for I knew you were there!
Ah, spring forever flowing,
I have found you, again!
We are together here
in this lovely green wood.



Poetry by Lavender
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Written on 2007-02-26 at 00:58

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ardent.March
This is very beautiful. I love the imagery in this poem.
It is a happy poem and you do these so well!
2007-03-20


Amanda K
you have a wild imagination that can capture very delicate photos.i loved your style.
2007-03-13


Rob Graber
This is lovely!
2007-03-04


anna3
So naturally beautiful captured feelings and smiling thought, wonderful and refreshing, thank you for sharing
2007-02-27


Zoya Zaidi
I agree both with Individuality and Tai Chi: A feeling spooky, then thinking may be it is your own reflection, when in the very next line the mood is upbeat, with the spering in the air; The slight ueasiness that remains at the end of the poem is both intriguing and stimulation at the same time... Artfully done, if your intent was to evoke those conflicting feelings in the reader?
Welcome to the bay!
Love, Zoya
2007-02-27


Zoya Zaidi
I agree both with Individuality and Tai Chi: A feeling spooky, then thinking may be it is your own reflection, when in the very next line the mood is upbeat, with the spering in the air; The slight ueasiness that remains at the end of the poem is both intriguing and stimulation at the same time... Artfully done, if your intent was to evoke those conflicting feelings in the reader?
Welcome to the bay!
Love, Zoya
2007-02-27



This sounds a bit macabre to me lavender, were you looking for your muse or your lover you buried in the woods? lol It has a good flow and that sinister feel to it gives it bite. Welcome to the bay, Tai
2007-02-26


Individuality
you reflection - your reflection :)
a sweet smiling piece here, in the woods of life we hide behind trees at times lol
2007-02-26