Critiquing Paranoia


Catlike in their pouncing
Critics are
Most happy when denouncing
Go too far

How resourceful they can be
When finding MY mistakes
They critique with so much glee
I think they're all just flakes

They place my commas
And dot my Is
They're like watchful mommas
In disguise

Though I may sound paranoid
I know they're sorely needed
In keeping me critique annoyed
Critiqu-ers have succeeded


By Stan Cooper...12/02 graphic by Don Hunt




Poetry by Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-02-26 at 22:24

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