Julie's Road

rock bottom ruin spawns success,
every vital low lifts lasting ability
opening door to radical revisions
stepping sublimely into tangibility.

eliminating ego streams stability;
open sober eyes embrace eternal light,
dims disturbance, devise tranquility
letting God make all the decisions.

take one step at a time my baby blue;
the fast lane is under construction.
dawn sires Arizona sunshine for you.

spent affliction sprouts serenity's
desert flower's positive point of view,
cradle convictions on road to recovery.



Poetry by aliceramone
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Written on 2007-03-12 at 03:38

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RedAquarius
"take one step at a time my baby blue;
the fast lane is under construction.
dawn sires Arizona sunshine for you."

That is just one snippet of perfection. I love how easily you seem to write, using raw energy and words that just meld together perfectly.
2007-03-12



Allitterations, rhythm, flow, contribute to make of this poem a very enjoyable read. You have a strong way of expressing yourself.
2007-03-12


Individuality
i think we all need a goal to aim for in life and moreso when we are at rock bottom, the only way is up then :) faith plays an important part in life i reckon, it gives out hope in streams of light :)
2007-03-12


Lavender
How well understood is the "one step at a time" in this charming yet distinguished poem. Finely written, well taken. So glad you are here with us, sharing your considerable talent, poet friend.
2007-03-12