LOVE'S LULLABY


In this land of sorrows past
love has a hard time to last.
In our time of greed and stress
less is less in this mess.

If we were to find love despite all
it would certainly be our downfall.
We miss the tools to treat it right.
It's time to wish our love goodnight.

In this land of future sorrows
our love sees no tomorrows.
We shed some tears, a silent cry.
This cry composes love's lullaby.



Poetry by Daybreaker
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Written on 2007-04-08 at 00:05

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You are so right daybreaker, but we can learn from our mistakes and learn to use those tools more effectively in future encounters, if we are so lucky of course? I really enjoyed it, has it changed at all? I read it a day or so ago. Smiling at you, Tai

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-04-10


yoonoos peerbocus
lullaby seen in an different angle- lovely
2007-04-09


TheLine
This have a very good tone to it. Especially the title.
Daybreaker you rhymemaster. ;)
2007-04-09