I´m trying to find my way in writing in English and am experimenting a lot and this is only a thread I picked up on.....




sudden

 

 

When life´s takin

a new sudden turn

Finding the path

of sadness

 

When you find

yourself trying to

see the point

Balancing on the verge

of madness

 

Desperately seeking

the sun

who´s gone hiding

behind the clouds

 

~Darkness surrounding~

 

Contract bounding

a lifetime-deal

with anxiety as a

constant companion

 

 

 

2007 © Jeanette Louridas

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





Poetry by Hagzissa
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Written on 2007-04-13 at 18:51

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I think it is always good to experiment with writing - it shows us new ways of developing a talent. I did like this poem very much as I felt I could relate much to it - the burden of anxiety

Elle
2007-04-13