Where do we go now . . .




. . . are we still walking forward
praising the sun who is shining . . .

are we swimming in a fishbowl
like lost souls . . .

or are we walking the road
to prediction . . .

 . . . the meaning with our life

is it the goal or the journey
who makes our life fulfilled?

The answer is blowing in the wind
like ashes turned to stars in the global
evolution of the great universe . . .
in the architects hands . . .

Is there someone out there?




Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2007-05-01 at 14:36

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amandeep
it is a thought provoking poem............nice.

Aman
2007-05-02


kath
..very good thought poem ... thank you ...

and life is a mystery that i sfor sure ...

hugs
kath
2007-05-01


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I think there is someone out there, but they can be very elusive

Well done Dan, a good philosophical poem

Elle x
2007-05-01


Rob Graber
Good write here, Dan!
2007-05-01