Love is not with me... :(


Your Aromatic Smell

The warm spring winds reminded me of your aromatic smell
And made me dream like I was swimming in a serene sea
I was going deeper and deeper,suddenly I saw a shell
I opened it and the magical feeling surrounded me
Then I found myself in another reverie
I was running faster and faster upon a green dell
There were some sweet memories to see
It is all about the love, it's about you,it's about me
I tried to escape from there,I was crying like hell
When I was back dreaming in a day of May
The love was over ,you got nothing to tell
Maybe It is time to see other oceans
Yes,I will go neverland with my caravel
Even though mY face fell
It seems it's time to say Farewell
to all these nonsense!!





Poetry by seda
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Written on 2007-05-27 at 20:54

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Anshul Sharma
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...

i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!

dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking

ur servent
ansh
2007-12-22


Anshul Sharma
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...

i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!

dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking

ur servent
ansh
2007-12-22


Anshul Sharma
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...

i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!

dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking

ur servent
ansh
2007-12-22


Anshul Sharma
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...

i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!

dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking

ur servent
ansh
2007-12-22


Anshul Sharma
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...

i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!

dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking

ur servent
ansh
2007-12-22


Anshul Sharma
... i am impressed... u know while reading ur poem i got the same feeling as i had got when i first read ode to the west wind... ur power of creating imagery(spell??) is absolutely fabulous...

i think i should applaud u more coz being a 17 year old boy i know how hard it is to come up with something as beautiful as that!!

dont mind me saying so but r u still in love??? lolz just joking

ur servent
ansh
2007-12-22


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Dear Seda...if you write so beautifully when just 17, I can't
imagine what you will write at 18...

Keep it up Seda....

Stan
2007-10-22


MeisI
Is it nice to say that there is a line of
words you like? Can you say the same
thing more than twice?
2007-08-11


Zoya Zaidi
Great work!
Happy Birthday dear Seda!
Love, Zoya
2007-06-09


angelwings
Reflective,Inspiring,the lustre of essentials unto life and loving.
2007-05-29


V.V.Ramesh
very well written Seda:)
Rate:5
2007-05-28


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Yet another great work of prose Seda , you work so well with the words of your second langwige . Superb , you go from strength to strength. I love , enjoy your wonderful work.

Ken
2007-05-27


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Yet another great work of prose Seda , you work so well with the words of your second langwige . Superb , you go from strength to strength. I love , enjoy your wonderful work.

Ken
2007-05-27