for Coolaaron's fascinating challenge


Twilight love



It never fades.
The sun will never set
on the eternal twilight of true love
that constantly glows warmer
with eternity that never fades.
So shall I dream of you forever
never waking from the sweetness
of that lingering sentimentality
of an eternal sunset
that but keeps on growing in maturity and beauty,
fascination and intensity the more it keeps on lasting
like a dream that no one ever wanted to awaken from
and no one ever really needed to.




Poetry by Christian Lanciai The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-06-19 at 13:15

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Coolaaron88
Thanks for the entry!!! : )

~Aaron Rowe
2007-06-19


John Ashleigh
"lingering sentimentality" -- My sentiments exactly.
2007-06-19


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes this is beautiful and I feel so true - we all feel love at whatever age but as we grow older the intensity and the richness of it can overwhelm

Elle x
2007-06-19