For my beautiful queen

 




When They Asked Me by M.A.Meddings

It feels like I am dreaming in teenage years
This tender excitement
That I feel every time you are near
This thrill was long denied me until I found you
And when they  asked me did I love one time
I did gently smile and say
Oh yes! I replied  
For the love of all this life is  you





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-03-13 at 07:37

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Amna Ehsan
no doubt strong,profound and compassionate expression of love. meticulous! thanks! amna.
2008-03-15


Bob
Yes, this is, as most of your writing, tender and joyous.
Bengt
2008-03-14


Rob Graber
The "thrill long denied":
So sweetly unexpected its return!
And then one feels again
the whole range of emotions stirred by love...
2008-03-13


Kathy Lockhart
My darling Michael this most tender of love poems speaks to my heart and fills me to overflowing with my love for you. How could i resist you? How could I deny my love? Your poertry is beautiful darling and I find this one especially so because of the preciousness of the love it shows. I love you. I love you. I love you. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyblyvm
2008-03-13