Inspired by Zoya's, Kip's and Marie's
nature poems. My own attempt at one.


Mother Nature's miracle rebirth[inspired by Zoya, Kip & Marie]

The land is barren
with winters grip
frozen ice and snow litter the ground
the crunching of it
as I slowly walk
is the only sound around.

Skeletal branchs
overhang my head
there's no movement
nor is there a sound
it's like Mother Nature is asleep
rugged up in winters icy bed.

But never fear
spring will soon be coming round
I can't wait to see
Nature's miracle rebirth
as new life appears
out of the ground.



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-02-01 at 08:48

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Zoya Zaidi
This is so beautiful & so fresh dear!
Hope is a feature always there
In your poems, and in your heart,
That, it fills me with pride to see,
That you always take
The positive view of things:
Though it is cold, and freezing too, summer is sure to come it is true!
Bravo! my dear to get inspired so!

((((((((Hugs Lizzy!)))))))

This is truely an inspired poem!
Very,very beautiful & full of life and hope!
I love you!

xxx, Zoya
2006-02-01


Marie
Beautiful! I can't wait until summer either...because winter is cold! :)
2006-02-01


penfold18
Well done Liz ,I love nature, and you do it justice :-)
2006-02-01


kip
...this is very thoughtful of you, it flows very well, an excellent choice of words. mother nature must have heard your concerns...
2006-02-01