Rays of sunshine



Pure love brings forth what matters most and you only know what it is: Speak to me ~




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Written on 2009-10-24 at 22:27

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm speaking to you...I know that beautiful invitation was
meant for me.....wasn't it?

good poem

xxx Stan
2009-10-25


Gopi
a short and cute poetic invitation but with a difficult subjunctive. you did it well.
2009-10-25


Rob Graber
What an intimidating invitation for a mere--and impure--mortal! Who will dare answer? I am reminded of the stern matriarch who habitually began family dinners (usually quiet, one suspects) by declaring, "We will now engage in intelligent conversation!" A provocative and enjoyable little write, this!

:-,?
2009-10-24