To describe it would be to forgoe the effect. To label it would be to deprive you of the joys that poetry provides. I will say though that in the poem " In the Castle of my Skin" is a reference to a Caribbean poet; George Lamming


I THINK OF YOU

Come together under the same Sun
Live together by way of the same Sin
Leave me here "In the Castle of my Skin"

I need you, but cannot admit it
I love you, I have been hit
by Cupid's Arrow yet I strike you with Dionysius' wit.

When my cheeks begin to "rouge"
Know that this is when I think of You.

Copywright© 2006 Bekim Rauseo



Poetry by Bekim Rauseo
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Written on 2006-02-14 at 22:17

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Griffonner The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nicely constructed and executed, Bekim.
2006-02-22


Zoya Zaidi
"I love you, I have been hit
by Cupid's Arrow yet I strike you with Dionysius' wit"
I like the way you have jextraposed Cupid's arrow's effect with the Dionysian wit (dear Nietzsche)!
Very witty and well crafted poem!
Welcome to the bay Rauseo!
I hope you enjoy yourself here?
(((((hugs)))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-02-18