poem origanally written to Eli Dekerd (my ex boyfriend)


Get Lost...NOW

Here we go again
I think I'm gonna scream
I know it only causes pain
but, you think it's all a game

You're causing so many problems
hiding behind me
expecting me to solve 'em.
Why don't you grow some balls and protect me?

If you aren't gonna be a man
take a hike
If you expect me to be a fan
Show me a spike

If you want my love
stop being so whimpy
show me your love
it's really simple

I don't love you
but, you love me,
others love me too,
but I only love Jeremy.



Poetry by Tabitha Campbell
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Written on 2006-03-04 at 17:49

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Emeka Chike Nwogu
I have read your text/poem. I enjoyed it
Please change *causeing* to causing*. I like especially the bold approach you employed to kick the guy who has been pestering your life. A lot of people cannot own up to defeat, even they've been told.
Bravo, girl. -Emeka-
2006-03-06


John Ashleigh
Sounds more like a.....

Nursery rhyme. Tehe.

Alot of thought probably went into this, though not much evidense of it, but on a lighter note - you did express emotion very well and did scream at us, I find that a hard way to write. Indeed you have mastered that. I enjoyed this, to a certain degree.

I'm not evil, by the way, or not better than you, just trying to get your writing skills a little more productive.

4!
2006-03-06


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
LOVE 'why don't you grow some balls
and protect me?
that line just SCREAMED at me.
Liz.
2006-03-06


lynn
i like this poem you really explained yourself about how you felt!
amber lynn
2006-03-05


UnforgivenAngel
you say what you mean,i like that.
2006-03-04