On considering the idea of alleviating chronic desensitisation from a lifetime of unconsciously chasing dopamine... or something in that vein. (pun unintended)


The Challenge

sooner or later
the perimeter
is broken into
the silence is shattered
manifolds are manifest
bringing you
to the test
after which
you might rest
your ailing aches
where your pain
can slowly abate
for the sake
of your sanity
believe me
it's worth it




Poetry by Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2011-03-03 at 04:58

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Morpheus
This is an amazing truth spun in an perfect, almost delicious ending. I like the free flow of your words, because the more this is read, the faster the reality comes into direct focus. Bravo!
2011-03-04


John Ashleigh
Sometimes we all need a boost in life. You create something dark here, which I very much enjoy. Thanks for sharing. 5/5.

Your friend,
John.
2011-03-03



To mask the pain
there is much to gain
just as long as we
are not numbed
a little amount we need
to ride life's speedy steed.
2011-03-03