I Can't take it anymore


When the pain becomes to painfull to bair
And you have to fight for a smile
keep the shine of your soul up to everyone you care for
to everyone you value
to everyone you love

When the tears are closing in
and the soul screams
when the heart breaks
then tears running down my cheeks
from my helpless eyes
An emptyness so far beyond

When the will becomes to, have to
then I'm sitting down quite
beyond the pain that exist
then I want to scream
I can't take it anymore

Everything becomes to an endless
emptyness of unknowness
so far beyond pain




Poetry by Malin Johansson
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Written on 2006-03-24 at 23:14

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Zoya Zaidi
"from my helpless eyes
An emptyness so far beyond"

Just love the hint of beyond the soul in these lines...

A beautiful piece of poetry Malin!

Full on smouldering, subdued and yet passionate feelings!
As usual hauntingly disturbing!
((((hugs))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-03-25


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Such a good second stanza and overall a good read. The dark abyss is a tiresome and fearsome place. But as a backdrop to life it allows those who experience it, to enjoy to the full, the moments of wonder that drift by. So it is always worth the while to hang in there. :-)
2006-03-25