A fun co-write to do

~l.~


Precipitating Purple Bruises(Pantoum co-write with cr4ky)

It's precipitating purple bruises
cascading rain of liquid tears
thunder whispering like a lover
Comfort brought by the closeness of fears

cascading rain of liquid tears
descends upon a weary mind
Comfort brought by the closeness of fears
In that darkness a heart you find

Descends upon, a weary mind,
confusing dark of a sucking black hole,
in that darkness; a heart you find,
that'll rest the troubles of your soul

confusing dark of a sucking black hole
Is not a self-preservative place to hide
in that darkness; a heart you find
That holds the key past this dark divide

Is not a self-preservative place to hide;
the probing flash of lightening strikes,
That holds the key past this dark divide,
It's precipitating purple bruises.



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-02-01 at 13:22

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Keiko
Wow very good write. It really touched my heart and made me feel like I was there with you. Great work.
2012-11-20