The smile of spring

 

 

 

 

 

The song of the blackbird

 

a fire of joy

 

like the smile of an old friend

 

 





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2012-03-22 at 19:12

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shells
Great title, this is my back garden! The familiarity, beauty, very uplifting.
2012-03-23



... just as your poetry breathes happiness into me, my friend.
While in the country today I was treated to a beautiful burst of blackbird chorus, recalling past springs as sweetly as this piece. And I love your use of colour here.
Applause!
2012-03-22


John Ashleigh
An incredible simile with a backbone. A great poem. Thankyou for sharing it. *applause*

Regards,
John.
2012-03-22