The bold lettering are references to titles from The Beatles. -7th April 2013.




Please.

With all my loving
I can't make ends meet.
I want to hold your hand
And tell you everything is fine;
Yet the nights are dark
and the sun shall never shine.
She loves you;
As do I, so please, please....





Poetry by John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2013-04-07 at 01:31

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No none sense & cut right through the core,
the music added a dimension to it that gives distinct
undertone. Thanks for sharing.
2013-04-07


Commentally Ill
ugh, the beatles are catchy! i'll be hearing these songs all night, no-thank-you-very-much. who are you to go about casting sunshine and rainbows on all the would-be poets? it's like developing photography, the darkness helps. wait, i read it again. aside from the titles, this is really heavy. if the sun shall never shine, that's just too much dark for much too long. it's way too depressing. so, overall, with the light and dark meeting to make pretty corners of this-poem-is-as-confused-as-a-dog-who-chases-its-tail-and-finally-catches-it, i am left to think it's perfect.

c.i.
2013-04-07