quiet am I

where there had been mist
now only light
sparkling the path

 

chattering ducks
on either broken pier
a heron stood
on sentry
as if outside
a palace royal
the pollarded trees
bursting with
coronets of green
life anew everywhere

 

the first dragonflies
zigzag along the path
two coots
mother and four ducklings
on a day out
avoid me with surprise
what is this thing
in light trousers
blue shirt
sitting
not talking
like us

 

no sign of the hawks today
swifts swoop
across the glassy lake
taking mayflies for their tea

slowly I feel I am melding
into the wooden bench
beneath the willow trees
beside the daisies

and the buttercups

 

nothing watches me now
even a peacock blue
a beetle considers
whether my boot
is worth climbing

 

I am as I am
becoming invisible
even to me

 

Canada geese
lift high
into the sky
their leader
reprimanding the slow
he is the apex

 

I am part of
a scene
my brain will absorb
as my spirit
flies

 

four swallows now
O
to be free as thee

 

the hawk is back fishing
two birds startle
the coot coots
the day is changing
a breeze arises
the sky no longer clear
petals scatter
on the bench
on me
I see

 

may flies
water-boatmen
air fills
with bird song
quiet
am
I





Poetry by Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2013-08-27 at 15:41

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A true joy comes through in this work
2013-09-05


Phill
I like the scene, glad you could share it with us!
2013-08-28


countryfog
". . . it is the movement that achieves the form." (Richard Howard) This is beautiful Peter, not just the presence but especially the motion of all that you, motionless, entered into. I'm reminded too of two lines from two very different poets that your poem seems to embrace into one thought: "surely some revelation is at hand" (Yeats) and "I place my feet with care in such a world." (Stafford). You have the patience and perspective to be fully present in the places that you write of and to reveal them in ways most of us overlook.
2013-08-27