he helped her create a second black rose. The first one:  http://poetbay.com/viewText.php?textId=82079




I gave him the second black rose


I could feel you when you entered my soul said he. Yeah, I knew that it will happen before we met, today. So what? -  Why didn't you told me that you still love me asked he. - Look into my eyes and listen to what I am saying and she calmly continued: I will always love you but you killed me, k-i-ll-e-d me and not only that you didn't even try to revive me I had to do it by myself, said she and paused(he didn't need to know more, she thought to herself). Look into my eyes and understand that for you I am dead, d-e-a-d, dead. There will never be something between us. I wanted to give you this new experience, now you know and that is it. Nothing more nothing less. Enjoy yourself but leave me alone. Said she. But what she didn't remind him was one of the dreams he once upon a time had when they were still together,  it felt like from another life time. . . .

She was dead and as a ghost she never left him. She was there to guide him when he was fighting with monsters and dragons, helped him win faster, protect himself until the day he asked her to see the madness in his eyes and let him die, don't help him anymore. Give him peace.

His unconscious and she have the most honest relationship ever and she listens . . .





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Written on 2014-02-03 at 17:47

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I agree with Jim, as your poem so clearly and elegantly explains, that relationships don't end because one says they have ended. It takes a long time to find the right place to keep that memory inside your heart. I think the memory remains always, but it needs to fall into that other section of the heart where it's ready to let both parties to move on. Beautiful and painful write.
~Ashe
2014-02-04



Ending a relationship doesn't end the relationship, it changes the nature of it. The physicality may be gone, but the mind games persist, or grow. I think that is what you're saying. That is what I see, and what I've learned.
2014-02-03