Feel The Sea




When she walks

Sweet rippling sunlight kisses water

A ribbon song sings dances to the wind

The grass in Heaven bows to bend 

When her footsteps touch the earth 

Waves tremble in the light of her smile

Feel the sea wandering free

When she walks



Poetry by Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2014-03-22 at 23:16

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Nabeela Altaf
This is such a sweet poem. Really brings up your feelings.
2014-03-24



A tender piece indeed from Yhe Salon. I enjoy the images springing to mind as I read of sunlight on water and the music inspired by the song of the ribbon. The penultimate lines are striking in the return of the water theme, flowing to sea. Applause!
2014-03-24


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
So pretty and tender how you put it across :) I get lovely feelings from this... good write.
2014-03-23