Spontaneous poem/letter to be enjoyed while it is still fresh?




Go ahead

 


I will show you my love today because who knows what tomorrow might bring but tomorrow I will remember that I loved you and feel strong enough to be who I am and and tomorrow I will go ahead and show you my love again because I will still have the time to keep doing that loving you with all my heart like right now

 

 





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Written on 2014-06-17 at 02:25

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Love with reservations, or lack of self-confidence, perhaps? is what comes through to me with these words. Very much like where you send my thoughts off to... I also like that it's left to the reader to make up their own scenario of what the words are getting at, too... echoes familiar spaces for me, though I realize probably not for the same circumstances which prompted the composition of these words. Lovely, sensitive and somewhat delicate are the words that come to mind as an impression of this. Needless to say, I enjoyed pondering over these words :)
2014-07-11



This sounds very romantic but I feel the reservations holding back. Love the feel of it.
2014-06-17