hypnotic sea


hypnotic sea

hypnotic sea
-- flows on
death stands
in life's doorway

ones who have
passed
-- dearly missed
lingering warmth -- lingers

soft rain falls
growing -- harder
fog rolls in
from sea's midst

sound of waves
casts a spell
-- life-altering
mind-opening

not challenging death
nor embracing it
dancing to tune of life
in-its-face

-- sea
flows on.

vcp

4 March 2015




Poetry by Victor
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Written on 2015-03-12 at 19:31

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shells
Your title drew me in as I love the sea, hypnotic definitely, I could watch the sea for ages, it sorts my head out. A lovely fluid write (excuse the pun.)
2015-03-13



What a beautiful concept! I love it. All of humanity could die, and the sea ..."flows on."
2015-03-12