Reaffirmation from the sole denizen of my soul!

My heart was hesitant

Beads of temptation dangled on the nerves

Yet the blood was licked by ever rushing depression

There the spice of the surroundings refashioned

And bestowed upon me some of its unpalatable kisses

Personages from the forthcoming autumn passed by

Giving me a message I wasn't ready for

Reminiscences flashed back

Nothing seemed constant except for myself consistently growing pale

But I never stepped outta my hedge timidly,

Cautious of commencing the thread

But silence said what compilations dare not say

And from the balcony of heart fluttered fear;

Sceptic mind blew a bashful suspicion in the air,

A trepidation that I repulsed upright

There burgeoned the flowers of hope

The master of my being stepped forward

I could discern the guilt in those eyes

The two of us had been afflicted;

With his arrogance and denial for so long

Suddenly he conveyed torment no more

His pair of eyes smiled shyly to my heart

And beheld my soul from the millions around

He couldn't hide what the feel expressed

His wonderment displayed a star on my brow

The affirmation that sheen pasted on my eyes

Was clearly meant for the world to read

That this bruised and battered bod

Belonged with him and only him!!!




Poetry by sadaf
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Written on 2015-08-24 at 11:28

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
This piece is very good. The language is compelling and expectation builds nicely. Bravo :)
2015-08-27


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
this feels like two poems, both subtly written, the first of trepidation, defined by, "My heart was hesitant," the second of realization, defined by the line: "The master of my being stepped forward"

the writing is very good, i like combination of formal language and the slang ("outta" and "bod"). I like the poem in its entirety.
2015-08-24