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Where do you fall asleep?




I sleep with my blinds shut! Otherwise I may as well sleep on the street, she concluded while taking a sip of her almost hot tea.

I sleep with the sounds of nature. Visualize while falling asleep that I sleep outside and inside nature's embrace. Do I wish or do I miss being a savage? Savage in the context of being primitive and uncivilized.



They both remained silent,
not wishing to make a dent
in each other's conviction. 

 

 

 





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Written on 2015-09-27 at 10:51

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
Interesting. The more modern we become the more primitive our desires are. Nice.
2015-10-03


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a very pregnant vignette that could springboard in any dimension or direction; very concise and almost surgical. Well written!
2015-09-28


Chaucer Whethers The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh, so a dent may or not be an intrusion into one's private nurture, depending upon the Nature of Things?
2015-09-28