string figures

 

~

 

at the edge of winter the land and sea

verge on being one and the same

black sea white ice black ice white sea

peaks rising fiercely jagged raw

from the waves, snow-faced granite

rock beaches along the inlets coves

gullies of snow drift in soft contrast

fill the valleys, this is an inhuman place

 

here and there, trees, more twisted trunk

than willowy branch, here and there

clusters of houses piers trawlers dories

nets and traps, all of it barely hanging on

here and there a figure defining the notion

of bare existence barely barely hanging on

 

all colourless but for faded paint, houses

and boats, otherwise black grey white

 

but for the stinging cold bringing tears

certainly not of sadness but tears nonetheless

tears on my eyelashes refracting sunlight

into my own private rainbow, the full spectrum

 

~

 

i may be overstating the case

 

a world of sinew strung taut

brittle cold heartless, if it weren't

for the soft underbelly of sea-life

under whitecaps, greenery and buds

dormant under ice snow, on branches

and what lies under quilts

 

the stories were once written in string

 

~

 

cold is working its way

through my soles up my legs

i cannot stand here much longer

 

the sun is up for hours

low on the horizon

you can't be too long away

 

give me a length of string

i'll knot the ends and begin

weaving our story on my fingers

as much as i know, but hurry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





Poetry by one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2015-10-09 at 20:15

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Jamsbo Rockda The PoetBay support member heart!
The bleak descriptions are very vivid and the cold must be having an effect on you. String is the thing indeed. I read this with pleasure even though the subject matter comes across as sad. You are a master of the cat's cradle :)
2015-10-14


shells
I thought the poem was finished at "into my own private rainbow, the full spectrum." love that line, but I was pleased there was so much more.
2015-10-11


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
This is not typing. It's fine, descriptive writing, and it's quite nice.
2015-10-10