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2021-04-24
Poignant and sadly sweet.
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| at the park
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2017-08-01
I like your way with words and images.
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| at the park
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2017-08-01
I like your way with words and images.
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| i made a vulture love me
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2017-07-31
good write!
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| GENRAL HAIGE HAD TEN THOUSAND MEN! (WW1)
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2017-07-31
the way of the world
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| Lessons
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2017-06-03
Heartfelt poem.
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| what use is the poet?
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2016-06-12
Language is a garden to a poet, an ocean, a wind, a sky full of mysteries.
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| Sky Fall
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2016-05-10
great stuff!!
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| Introspection
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2016-04-26
The whole piece is like a falling down the rabbit hole albeit in vivid images and dark colours.
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| Just a Tick
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2016-03-03
Yes! Precisely!!
I agree!
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| Eye Color
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2016-03-03
Love it!!
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| maybe
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2016-02-11
I know the feeling.
Love the ease and flow of your words and images
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| Salut
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2016-02-07
You are funny!!
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| The Smell of the Ocean
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2015-12-29
now I want to hear you sing it!
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| THE NIGHT
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2015-12-02
simple and to the point! Good!
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| The Sound of Sun
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2015-11-24
good stuff!!
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| On Learning Of A Friend In Hospice
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2015-11-06
I love this
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| Nearly My Oldest Memory
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2015-09-28
Good stuff!!
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| First And Last Is The Letting Go
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2015-09-24
This was Very good! I love birds, in particular the small ones. The air made visible. Yes!!!!
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| I am lost epiphany in a dragon smoke
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2015-09-02
Ha ha
Maybe it is not about understanding a meaning
but just another way to listen
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| there is panic in the I
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2015-08-05
what can I say Meecheegan...
I use the I in a fashion never used before
so perhaps there will be others
till then
I am here
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| repeatedly in summer flustered with I
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2015-07-19
I is the conscious entity of any man.
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| repeatedly in summer flustered with I
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2015-07-19
the I in my poetry is often not only I but the I in all of us - a state of being - the name I use to describe that which we can describe because there is an I to see it
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| Winter
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2015-06-21
he he you put a smile to my face :-)
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| torrents
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2015-06-17
most of what I write is a kind of celebration albeit dark and depressive but the mere fact that we exist on the brink of extinction is a marvel
so
even in my grottiest moments I do celebrate the time I am still here
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| torrents
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2015-06-16
changed it a bit
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| ...to end all...
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2015-06-15
this is very good very naked and very down to the ditches harrowing anti war anti hate anti all bs poem
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| Bob
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2015-06-14
Hear hear
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| -30
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2015-06-14
Yes.
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| Footy
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2015-06-13
Ha ha Very good!!!
How about football and philosophy?
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| Journey
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2015-06-09
how true and anyway
why bother
life is life
the rest is not even in between
a "strange friend"
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| Hastings
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2015-06-09
ha ha!!!!
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| Hallelujah
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2015-06-09
Love it
especially the first two stanzas
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| goodbye
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2015-06-05
This is pure beauty!!!
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| PoetBay is 10 years old!
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2015-06-04
I'm still here. I remember the beginning and he who started it. All the best to you!!
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| be gone solitude
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2015-05-30
ha ha but the woman in the poem is the woman :-)
added a few verses
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| ever-changing
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2015-05-30
I love it!!
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| ducks in a pond
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2015-05-19
Good to know.
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| ducks in a pond
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2015-05-18
see for your self: Bob has written a comment on your text the wounds of boycott
I tried to reply to his ? but ...
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| ducks in a pond
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2015-05-18
I think that if you can block someone because you don't appreciate the comment, that is in no way derogatory, on the contrary, I gave an up beat comment, than the possibility to block is ridiculed and poses a threat to the free word.
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| An Old Vintage
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2015-05-17
love the images
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| MALALA YOUSAFZAI - ARMED AND DANGEROUS!
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2015-04-23
yes
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| Cleaning Spectacles
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2015-04-23
it is an older man's prerogative to lose need of being absolute or even coherently true, I think.
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| Still Skating
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2015-04-21
Great stuff!! Tender with so much love and trust.
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| Beyond The World
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2015-04-20
Nice meter an easy flow. Down to the nitty gritty of getting on with it.
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| This is not a poem
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2015-04-14
I'd say it's not a voluntary gift but often a choice made under duress or at gunpoint. Circumstances forces them to do more for less.
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| Song Of The Neo Angels
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2015-04-12
Good stuff! Thick with imagery!
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| seriously dreaming in the eye
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2015-01-13
so
normally I do not cherish
the thought
of going back
to explain or interpret
what I have chiseled
but here it is evening
any ending could happen
even if you are a shaman
there is no second anything
it is about consciousness
manner getting close to
those special moments
wound breath solitude
it really doesn't matter
in the end
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| Quenched into Percentile (for Jessica)
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2015-01-11
lol!!
looking back at you!
very good stuff!!
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| Riding out with Alice
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2014-12-16
I like it!
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