| WHEN LIFES DRAGING YOU DOWN!
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2016-09-07
Great poem that inspires hope from friendship. I only have two friends, but they are my brothers who I known for 20 years. They helped me through a lot of problems and I helped them through theirs. This poem makes me appreciate my friends more as this art form is excellent! Any poem that inspires is a exceptional writing.
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| The Sarcastic Tool
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2016-07-27
Wow, great rhyming poem with very good metaphors! It certainly has very strong message that I love. Flows well and great word choice. Overall, excellent job!
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| Night Light
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2016-07-27
Great free verse poem with very good metaphors. It has very powerful meaning behind this art form. Flows well and I like the word choice. Overall, excellent job!
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| SINCE THE BEGINING! (inspired by Jamsbo Rockda work)
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2016-07-27
Great free verse poem with powerful meaning. I certainly like the word choice and it flows very well. Overall, excellent job!
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| Aging
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2016-07-03
wow, excellent rhyming poem! it is certainly unique. it flows very well. I love the rhymes. powerful meaning.
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| THE ENDING!
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2016-07-03
An Haiku is a 5-7-5 syllables count. usually about nature. it come from Japan. here is an example of mine:
Our hiding Sun:
Our sun is hiding
Behind the clouds for a week,
Let there be sunlight.
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| The War
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2016-06-29
great flow. good word choice for rhymes. a powerful message that is full of meaning. overall, excellent job!
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| To be Human
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2016-06-27
great free verse poem. I certainly like the metaphors you have chosen and the word choice. overall, excellent job!
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| Music Therapy
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2016-06-27
A great free verse poem on music! the scheme is there and the meaning is there. overall, excellent job!
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