haiku of a sort.... found myself here in this state this early morning.

Pain's Panic

blinding binding pain
clenching of head down to knees
screaming for relief

Haiku by Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-05-13 at 19:03

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Pamela A Lamppa
Oh this is marvelous Senryu. Pefect in every way and a delight to read. Excellent. ~Pam

a very good haiku and so close to the genre in its expose of the emotion well done rgds mike

Malin Johansson
This one really hurt when I read it... good words on few lines..great written.. rgds Malin