Lawrence Beck
An interesting poem. I especially liked the first line.
2017-09-04

Jamsbo Rockda
Water is the stuff of life and sometimes of death. This piece is laced with disappointments and doubt. I like the way it is structured and the ongoing theme. Oh and the line "All life sails to death in the time of water. " is brilliant.
2017-09-04

shells
We love it/dislike it, but we can't do without it, I have a healthy respect for it, but the power it can hold scares me, especially recently with the rains and flooding in parts of the world. The final two lines ring true.
2017-09-03

Kathy you are so right and your portrayal is very unique.
I hadn't thought of the breadth of water's command of us.
There is a powerful tug of sensuality in your poem and it strikes, pulls one in and overwhelms but it also inspirits!
Incredible work that I will return to many times!:)
2017-09-02

Well done, Kathy. But don't go near
the water. We don't want to lose you.
2017-09-02

Most of pur planet consists of water, and we can't live without it, but it's power can be a frightening thing. Right now, when it rages upon us it is exactly as you say. Vivid descriptions.
Ashe
2017-09-02

ken d williams
Bravo, Kathy, a great work, inspiring work.
Ken
2017-09-01

josephus
As a sailor, water is my element my home my scape. You've described it in ingenious ways that are very intimate. Great work, Kathy.
2017-09-01