Poemee

i am going to write
a poem
daily for you

My offering.
My ritual.

Not that i need any reminder
of our love
or any reinforcement for that matter
but its just that
i like sitting with you
with myself
with these words
falling easy
like snowflakes
around us.




Poetry by Sona The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2023-10-20 at 19:34

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Editorial Team The PoetBay support member heart!
Your poem has been chosen to be featured on the home page of PoetBay. Thank you for posting on our poetry website!
2023-10-23


Sameen The PoetBay support member heart!
You've condensed into words how I felt when I decided to write a poem a day for my lover. Bravo
2023-10-22


one trick pony The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes. A few words, an intimacy, a sharing, and a hint of something beyond the snowflakes of words.

Very enjoyable to read, Sona. I love the simplicity which is anything but simple.

If that makes sense!
2023-10-21


D G Moody The PoetBay support member heart!
Very good imagery - well done.
2023-10-21


Lawrence Beck The PoetBay support member heart!
Very nice. I like the image of words drifting down like snow.
2023-10-21



I can understand that
even if I think it's a tender emotion
that find its existence in a few thing
2023-10-21