I missed the lastromantichero's challenge...i was out of commission for a few days...but, i wrote this silly piece back on March of 2005. So, I humbly submit my "blues" rendention.


Housework Blues

As I sit here composin'
poetry from the heart,
I have so much housework
I don't know where to start...

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

da daa daa daa da dat!

The kitchen needs moppin'
dishes lie in the suds
the counter needs wipin'
the dog tracked in the mud!

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

da daa daa daa dat!

The be'room calls for cleanin'
it's voice strangled by dust
sheets 'n blankets twisted
upon the bed in disgust.

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

da daa daa daa dat!

Oh, the bathroom is longin'
to be rid of its smell
the toilet needs scrubbin'
I'm surround by Hell!

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

da daa daa daa dat!

The laundry's pilin' up fast
growin' by night and day
creatin' a monster
I have no time to play...

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

da daa daa daa dat!

So I'll stop writin' now
push away from the screen
take a broom in my hand
and fly right out of this scene!

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

da daa daa daa dat!

Kathy Lockhart
8/30/06








Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2006-08-30 at 23:56

Tags Blues  Humor  Housework 

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi there kathy this is such a good contribution nand stands in its own right I love it rgds
mike
2006-08-31



Wonderful blues Mom!!!I sung this blues La la la....love it!!!kissess(daughter)
2006-08-31


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Honey Chile, put on dem blue suede shoes and get yo'self ta woek! I'll jine ye jes as soon as I kin git mysef out dis hyea Luzeeanna rockin cheer!
2006-08-31


keith nunes
you have every right to have the blues when being faced with THE house
2006-08-31



Wow! The housework blues!!
We all have it - Only you can express it so damn good!
2006-08-31


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
da daa daa daa dat!

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

The kitchen needs moppin'
the toilet needs scrubbin'
and its 00:06 *lol*

What a coincidence I am cleaning my house today and this is the perfect housework blues!

Thank you Kathy!

I've got the blues................
The house
work
blue ues.....

da daa daa daa dat!
2006-08-31