Forever making me shiver

Hand in hand
Bottle in hand

You're here right beside me
Tonight
Lying on the ground
It's hard, honey
The asphalt
And knowing that you won't ever love me
At all

Lying here
In the middle of the night
and your breath
digs a hole in me

You put your hand
On my hand
Its hard to know
That you would
Get up and leave right now
If you could
But you cant 'cause your to damn drunk
tonight

Hand in hand
Bottle in hand
Your breath
Forever making me shiver

You're more beautiful
Then I remembered
Lying here
Right beside me under the city lights
I turn around to kiss you
But I miss your mouth
My lips hits the asphalt instead
It tastes like burned tyres
But it still smells like you




Poetry by frig
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Written on 2006-09-10 at 18:42

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Zachary P. B.
i totally connect to this one... sort of unrequited love, it's painful and cold and hard and frozen, our hearts and the asphalt of this world, yeah?

yeah.
z
2006-09-11


ChiLLie
so sad.. so painfull,but still so true...
2006-09-10


CC
powerful painful and beautiful. an innovative description yet still applicable to many peolple's experiences.. simple butt effective language
2006-09-10


ceciliaviola
Beautiful the way the feelings are mainfested in this poem
2006-09-10