it has been raining for 3 days.


Lamentations of Loneliness

Tears are falling from the sky
they drip from my head and pour
out of my eyes
"Missing you," they softly sigh
as they pass me by and by
on their way to loneliness.

drip

drop

drip

drop

puddles form in pools of pain
silent but for the tears again
stillness leaves a cold dark stain
"Missing you," all in refrain
as the choir sadly sings
in the depths of loneliness

drip

drop

drip

drip

drop

Nothingness.

kathy lockhart
9/12/06




Poetry by Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-09-12 at 19:41

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Janine>K
Well it is a very good time to sell umbrellas or even hot chocolate J

A fantastic write…I love the way you can write about anything, and never fail to disappoint the reader.. Kathy you really have a talent!! The way you see things and put everything you experience on paper is magnificent. I will be very sad if you leave the bay one day…

Always love to read your poems
2006-09-14


Arti
Beautiful... the river is swollen, isnt it Kathy?
2006-09-13


Phyllis J. Rhodes
stunning, awesome, brilliant, captivating, mesmerizing! Bookmarked
2006-09-13


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
three days of greyness and wetness... bleh... this captures the deserted paysage and bleak, unmotivating, lonely mood this sort of weather brings... thats how i feel after a few days of rain anyway... a good poem... *hug* xx
2006-09-12


keith nunes
stunning work kathy! you've made the rain yours and used the negative vibe to create a thing of beauty. what a poet!
2006-09-12


Rob Graber
I like the way the poem itself "drips"!
2006-09-12


lastromantichero
hey ther Katherine thesevtears are so poignantly described well done but a sad poem rgds mike
2006-09-12


Sandy Hiss
I can see and feel the rain drops falling. Sorrowful yet tender write.
2006-09-12


•Angela
i can feel the rain falling... just beautiful...
2006-09-12


Will
Such an Eloquent Write.

LOVE THE FLOW...
2006-09-12


Dani
i really like this one i think its soo good who the reader get wrapped in the same emotion as you the writter...deffo fave i have read today..

i do dancing and i was wondering if it would be possible to use your poem to make a dance to?

Dani xxxx
2006-09-12


wee2souls
how I hear the rain
How I feel the lonliness
in this read my Mommakac
wish I could be there in person
to give you many sqeezes
and a wee kiss on the cheekerama:)))
Loves and hugs
love cindymac:))
2006-09-12