I didn't put any thought in this at all, I just let my hands to the writing.


The Lost Soul

A lost soul wandering,
so adventurous and sad.
In between Heaven and Hell,
which way to go?
staying inbetween will only cause more confusion.
Make your decision quick before darkness prevails.
Run to the gate before it's too late,
closing into darkness,
the light is gone.
Falling in the nothingness that your mind created.
Waking from the dream so real covered in sweat,
screaming for forgiveness realizing it was not just a dream.

-David Lomenick



Poetry by David Lomenick
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Written on 2006-11-28 at 01:25

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Isn't that what you always do. Your poetry puts so much emotion into them that half of them have made me cry, the other half have given me vivid images that have made me have reactions to them as if i lived them. I love this poem. This poem made me shiver...have i read this one before?

love,
kiva
2006-11-28