Think about it for awhile and you'll get it...Now youve thought for a while, this one's about Love...Hate (Love) War...get it now???


Left Out

Running through a forest,
a forest full of hate and war,
when we trip and fall into something never felt before.

-David Lomenick



Poetry by David Lomenick
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Written on 2006-12-07 at 01:14

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Daybreaker
I'm not sure that I get it, but I certainly can appreciate the rhytm and rhymes!

Liked it alot.
2006-12-08



HA HA HA! you'll never figure it out. I figured it out becuse i'm very special to the author.

~Kiva
2006-12-07