Daybreaker
Yes, this piece should be read in a slow pace, and the afterthoughts will strike down upon the reader.

Thanks for your contribution my friend!
2006-12-01

Phyllis J. Rhodes
This should be read over and over, and the reader should stop and reflect on each of the things that go on everyday. What a great poem for discuss. So many lessons here. It could be used in a philosophy class as well as a Sunday School class. It is universal in so many ways. Thought provoking and lesson teaching. A great poem!
2006-11-30

wee2souls
Everyday is everyday I do know what follows tomorrow
is another day so today is tomorrow and tomorrow can be
this given day......this write is today what you may read
tomorrow and that I may add is
EVERYDAY:))) I laugh this day as it is a everyday thing!!
JUst have to be careful each day as sometimes you can
open a can of sardines you do know!! have to be careful
which ones you want to eat as some can be very fishy
so then you just throw the whole dang can away as
never do like the ones that are fishy anyway!! and the
reason behind the can of sardines hmmm?? well
you tell me lol:)
loved this write and have no clue what brought me to
Sardines but eh. this is what came into my mindful thinking
as that is a everyday thing to have a Wacky mind!!! so eh
+++++++moooooo

love you
cindymac wh
2006-11-29

amandeep
hi
Katy ji
A wonderful poem. what a poem!
"""I laugh, I cry, I live, I stray, I die every day.""''
Yes we are dying, in day to day life....... time is passing.......but we have no time to live our life........What do you think??????
in day to day life, we have involve very much..........we have no time to see our parents and our children.........
a man who works all the day how he can spend his life in better way. poor is going to poorer and rich is going to richer. a
this is a scene of India. i dont know it happens in other countries or not.
But...................................
2006-11-29

Priya
wow!
What a poem!
good description about Everyday Life?
Yes we work, sleep, eat, brush, pray and so more..........everyday
in this day to day and boring life
How we can enjoy?????
how can we meet with God??????
i think, No
the man complicate the life with his own ways.....
will a day come? when man will free from tension, about his family, about his work, about his study and lot more........
but the poem is tooooooooo good.
very nice...
Yours loving
Priya
2006-11-29

Ground hog day is not a Tai way, and as you so delightfully point out Kathy, life is just living and giving it your best foot forward, and no two days the same mundane, it is just how we deal with each day that dictates our moods. Very nice work indeed. You say it all so clearly. I will have to look up this challenge and have a go. Smiling today, Tai
2006-11-29

lastromantichero
what a beautifu lpoem from a lovely heart well done rgds mike
2006-11-29

Bhakta Raj Giri
True! Each day is new and challenging too. You have well said in unmost simplicity.
Thanx for sharing.
2006-11-29