Connection is a big this in this poem...I had a Silvery Black ring that shattered...I am connecting the black rose to the ring here.


Black (as the) Rose

Broken,
as broken as my heart so tender,
so black.
Black (as the) Rose that resides in my soul.

-David Lomenick



Poetry by David Lomenick
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Written on 2006-12-07 at 01:04

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Sandy Hiss
Lovely, simple write. I really like the last line, beautiful.
2006-12-07



Ha ha ha. I gave you that ring. I gave it to you becuase our love is that of a black rose and that it was perfect for you. And now it has shattered, but our love still lives on.

Love,
Kiva
2006-12-07