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The Joy of Her Heart [A Thomas Perdue - Liz Munro Tanka]

When she does laugh, the
Very heavens do shake with
The joy of her heart...

Her hearts joy is matched only by
Her other half's caring soul.




Poetry by Thomas P - Liz M
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Written on 2007-03-12 at 03:18

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
this is a wonderful tanka...and i love that you are sharing a name here. Great Idea!
2007-03-12


Rob Graber
Really nice write, guys!

PS: Line 4 needs "heart's" (possessive), which would look especially neat above line 5's "half's"...
2007-03-12