The fact that he suddenly writes in a foreign language only accentuates his poor character and lack of decency. This (missing antecedent!, cries the proofreader) is not a message to anyone, but I still think he's at least semi-cool.
It is issued and selected with the greatest care
so tread carefully on his sacred paths if you dare
one thing I'll make abundantly clear
you'll fall in his lands of forsaken fear
don't go where the songs of poor rhymes cry
you'll be damned if you're foolish enough to try
if my words make you feel like you've choked
know that his trust has been forever revoked
Cordially Yours,
The Black Man
Poetry by Bjorn Karlsson
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Written on 2007-04-14 at 10:00
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Revoked
It is issued and selected with the greatest care
so tread carefully on his sacred paths if you dare
one thing I'll make abundantly clear
you'll fall in his lands of forsaken fear
don't go where the songs of poor rhymes cry
you'll be damned if you're foolish enough to try
if my words make you feel like you've choked
know that his trust has been forever revoked
Cordially Yours,
The Black Man
Poetry by Bjorn Karlsson
Read 726 times
Written on 2007-04-14 at 10:00
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