More like a poem


All because of you

I'm cleaning your room
You are sleeping there; your dreams are in bloom
I'm taking it out and I'm taking the blame
Even though I don't know your middle name
You maybe think that I'm disgusting
You may be right, but is it worth discussing
I'm doing this cause you know I have to
I'm doing this cause you know you need it to get trough
It's all because of you
It's all because of you
All because of you ...





Poetry by Gronlund
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Written on 2007-06-14 at 01:29

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kath
I hear music in these lines ,,, nice lyrics and rythm ,,,,,,

best wishes
Kath
2007-06-16


Hagzissa
Somewhat a bit different from the poems I usually gets to read here... But I do like this one. Great rhymes and a good flow in the text. Maybe that's the trick to make cleaning a bit more amusing, writing a poem about it? *lol*

Oh, and welcome to the bay. :)
2007-06-16