Love Like Suicide

She writes her feelings.
She tells her dreams.
She falls for guys who aren't what they seem.
She has her goals.
She speaks her mind.
She doesn't leave her past behind.
She always wonders.
She gets so scared.
She needs to have somebody there.
She wants this boy.
She is almost through.
She doesn't think he wants her too.
She questions it.
She hates her life.
She ponders; looking at a knife.
She thinks shes nothing.
She is living a lie.
She knows it'd be easy with suicide.
She envisions hell.
She then looks above
...and prays that her death might just bring her his love.




Poetry by Kelly
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Written on 2007-06-17 at 06:09

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amandeep
i like d this one. you are a good poet. you exoressed the feelings of your heart in a very well way. i liked the poem. and the rhyme of this poem that belongs to the word "She". An excellent text.

Life is so precious kelly, dont waste it. do something special. dont waste your life for that one who doesnt love you........

Welcome to Poetbay!

With regards

Amandeep

Take care.....
2007-06-17


Rob Graber
Repetition of "She" to start every line builds effectively to the last line's desperation.
2007-06-17


katiiieanne
Awe I like it lady ma'am. Cuz I was reading suicidal type poetry yesterday and it's kinda like...All suicidal people secretly hope someone cares enough to stop them.

*ehem* Richard. Too bad he doesn't love me enough to stop me from loving him. Seeing as that's the only suicide I'm committing..
2007-06-17