i'll probably add more to this and form it into a song
but for now..this is wat i have so far..


missing you...

The warmth of you're breath
And you're gentle touch
It defines life and death
God, I miss you so much

You're what keeps me going
Keeps the blood flowing
You and me
That's all I see

Please don't cry
I've got you here
No more lies
And no more tears

Fight and defend
Lets reach the end
I believe in you
And our love is true

The warmth of you're breath
And you're gentle touch
It defines life and death
God, I miss you so much

The emotions I feel
Make everything heal
Do you feel the same?
Or is this just a game

And
When I close my eyes
You're all I see
Baby where you are
is where I wanna be.




Poetry by blondie
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Written on 2007-07-03 at 03:59

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Cr4Ky
a fine start! good rythm and flow.. could almost hear a tune in my head while reading this. a text with good potential of becoming a beautiful and heartfelt song! keep the spirit alive and feel the song in the poet inside of you!
Kindly
Øystein
2008-05-11


penfold18
Has great rhyme an flow and would make excellent lyrics to the right tune.
2007-07-03