I broke my arm at a freinds birthday party the other night. More pain and poems. and if you havent notived im kinda accident prone and its too hard to caitalize with one arm. sorry.


Oh The Pain In My Arm

oh the pain in my arm

how great thou art

never to rest

always at your best

oh the pain in my arm

off a roof

on a board with four wheels

an hour will pass

before i feel

oh the pain in my arm

a worried friend

i,

calm indeed

oh the pain in my arm

a mysteriuos shot

leads the pain away

makes me goofy indeed

only to return the next morning

oh the pain in my arm

 





Poetry by Valerie
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Written on 2007-09-01 at 16:05

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Jessica Rexroat
Broken arm, infected nail - what am I to do with you my dear. Just smile at you and shake my head. You are living a good and fun life. You are youth and beauty. I know that these things will happen. You only have an arm, two legs, two feet, two hands, several fingers, several toes, maybe some ribs left to break, just please space them out. If you broke both of your arms you could always type with a pencil held between your teeth.
I love you dear, keep giving your gift to the people here at the bay. I am lucky enough to live with you, they only get little glimpses.
2007-09-23


Phyllis J. Rhodes
It's hard to believe you've done this. But then again, maybe not. You are, after all, Valerie. There goes Volley Ball season, where you were excelling. But, now you can consentrate on other things, like spelling. (Hey, don't get mad, it rhymed!) What makes this so bad, is this is your right arm and you are right handed, and your injured toe is on the right foot too! Careful, although you write beautifully about them, you can't afford any more injuries! Love you, Mammy
2007-09-03


Colin Skilton
Dear Oh Dear Valerie!
They say it comes in threes so bash you had or something to throw it off!
Same cure as suggested in your toe poem!!
Colinxx
2007-09-02


Amanda K
awful pain.


regards,
2007-09-01


Kathy Lockhart
Oh the pains you express
Are the woes of Valness.
It's because you are you
That these things happen, too.
So take care of yourself
Or you will end up on a shelf
Not riding on bikes and wheels,
Not getting the thrilling thrills
That come from being mobile
To travel the world globa.l
Next time think a minute
And remember the pain that's in it.
When flying off roofs without wings,
You will feel the painful stings
Of crashing.

advice from your aunt
: )
2007-09-01


MAXreturns
Oh Valerie you must been hurt so much..toe and arm be carefull the bay wants you here:D...

~MAX
2007-09-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
You have really been in the wars and you can still write enchanting poetry but you better start taking care of yourself
dont want you injured
too much you might not be able to write here well done on this piece of fun rgds mike
2007-09-01